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@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+[[chapter_lvm]]
 Logical Volume Manager (LVM)
 ----------------------------
 ifdef::wiki[]
@@ -6,7 +7,7 @@ endif::wiki[]
 
 Most people install {pve} directly on a local disk. The {pve}
 installation CD offers several options for local disk management, and
-the current default setup uses LVM. The installer let you select a
+the current default setup uses LVM. The installer lets you select a
 single disk for such setup, and uses that disk as physical volume for
 the **V**olume **G**roup (VG) `pve`. The following output is from a
 test installation using a small 8GB disk:
@@ -32,7 +33,7 @@ VG:
   swap pve  -wi-ao---- 896.00m     
 ----
 
-root:: Formatted as `ext4`, and contains the operation system.
+root:: Formatted as `ext4`, and contains the operating system.
 
 swap:: Swap partition
 
@@ -63,7 +64,9 @@ Bootloader
 
 We install two boot loaders by default. The first partition contains
 the standard GRUB boot loader. The second partition is an **E**FI **S**ystem
-**P**artition (ESP), which makes it possible to boot on EFI systems.
+**P**artition (ESP), which makes it possible to boot on EFI systems and to
+apply xref:sysadmin_firmware_persistent[persistent firmware updates] from the
+user space.
 
 
 Creating a Volume Group
@@ -72,7 +75,7 @@ Creating a Volume Group
 Let's assume we have an empty disk `/dev/sdb`, onto which we want to
 create a volume group named ``vmdata''.
 
-CAUTION: Please not that the following commands will destroy all
+CAUTION: Please note that the following commands will destroy all
 existing data on `/dev/sdb`.
 
 First create a partition.
@@ -104,7 +107,7 @@ A real world example:
 
 Now a filesystem must be created on the LV.
 
- # mkfs.ext4 /dev/data/vz
+ # mkfs.ext4 /dev/pve/vz
 
 At last this has to be mounted.
 
@@ -119,8 +122,7 @@ To make it always accessible add the following line in `/etc/fstab`.
 Resizing the thin pool
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-Resize the LV and the metadata pool can be achieved with the following
-command.
+Resize the LV and the metadata pool with the following command:
 
  # lvresize --size +<size[\M,G,T]> --poolmetadatasize +<size[\M,G]> <VG>/<LVThin_pool>