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@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ enables you to store the configuration of thousands of virtual
 machines. By using corosync, these files are replicated in real time
 on all cluster nodes. The file system stores all data inside a
 persistent database on disk, nonetheless, a copy of the data resides
-in RAM which provides a maximum storage size is 30MB - more than
+in RAM which provides a maximum storage size of 30MB - more than
 enough for thousands of VMs.
 +
 Proxmox VE is the only virtualization platform using this unique
@@ -126,9 +126,8 @@ running Containers and KVM guests. It basically creates an archive of
 the VM or CT data which includes the VM/CT configuration files.
 
 KVM live backup works for all storage types including VM images on
-NFS, CIFS, iSCSI LUN, Ceph RBD or Sheepdog. The new backup format is
-optimized for storing VM backups fast and effective (sparse files, out
-of order data, minimized I/O).
+NFS, CIFS, iSCSI LUN, Ceph RBD. The new backup format is optimized for storing
+VM backups fast and effective (sparse files, out of order data, minimized I/O).
 
 
 High Availability Cluster
@@ -146,7 +145,7 @@ Flexible Networking
 Proxmox VE uses a bridged networking model. All VMs can share one
 bridge as if virtual network cables from each guest were all plugged
 into the same switch. For connecting VMs to the outside world, bridges
-are attached to physical network cards assigned a TCP/IP
+are attached to physical network cards and assigned a TCP/IP
 configuration.
 
 For further flexibility, VLANs (IEEE 802.1q) and network
@@ -184,8 +183,8 @@ Open source software also helps to keep your costs low and makes your
 core infrastructure independent from a single vendor.
 
 
-Your benefit with {pve}
------------------------
+Your benefits with {pve}
+------------------------
 
 * Open source software
 * No vendor lock-in
@@ -243,4 +242,5 @@ integrated, and they can use the same storage and network features
 as virtual machines.
 
 include::howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc[]
+include::translation.adoc[]