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@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ started (resumed) again. This results in minimal downtime, but needs
 additional space to hold the container copy.
 +
 When the container is on a local file system and the target storage of
-the backup is an NFS server, you should set `--tmpdir` to reside on a
+the backup is an NFS/CIFS server, you should set `--tmpdir` to reside on a
 local file system too, as this will result in a many fold performance
 improvement.  Use of a local `tmpdir` is also required if you want to
 backup a local container using ACLs in suspend mode if the backup
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ the target storage. This can negatively effect other virtual guest as access
 to storage can get congested.
 
 To avoid this you can set bandwidth limits for a backup job. {pve}
-implements to kinds of limits for restoring and archive:
+implements two kinds of limits for restoring and archive:
 
 * per-restore limit: denotes the maximal amount of bandwidth for
   reading from a backup archive
@@ -185,14 +185,14 @@ you have `Data.Allocate' permissions on the affected storage.
 
 You can use the `--bwlimit <integer>` option from the restore CLI commands
 to set up a restore job specific bandwidth limit.  Kibit/s is used as unit
-for the limit, this means passing '10240` will limit the read speed of the
+for the limit, this means passing `10240' will limit the read speed of the
 backup to 10 MiB/s, ensuring that the rest of the possible storage bandwidth
-is available for the already running virtual guests, and does not impacts
-their operations.
+is available for the already running virtual guests, and thus the backup
+does not impact their operations.
 
 NOTE: You can use `0` for the `bwlimit` parameter to disable all limits for
 a specific restore job. This can be helpful if you need to restore a very
-important virtual guest as fast as possible. (Need `Data.Allocate'
+important virtual guest as fast as possible. (Needs `Data.Allocate'
 permissions on storage)
 
 Most times your storage's generally available bandwidth stays the same over