From: Dominic Jäger Date: Tue, 28 Jul 2020 09:32:13 +0000 (+0200) Subject: pvecm: Add comma after 'First' X-Git-Url: https://git.proxmox.com/?p=pve-docs.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=9ffebff57f8fe390cb909ea26c45fd63103f4c47 pvecm: Add comma after 'First' Comma after sequence words like first, next, then, or last. Signed-off-by: Dominic Jäger --- diff --git a/pvecm.adoc b/pvecm.adoc index e7b36c5..390fb4b 100644 --- a/pvecm.adoc +++ b/pvecm.adoc @@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ node from the cluster. WARNING: Ensure all shared resources are cleanly separated! Otherwise you will run into conflicts and problems. -First stop the corosync and the pve-cluster services on the node: +First, stop the corosync and the pve-cluster services on the node: [source,bash] ---- systemctl stop pve-cluster @@ -527,7 +527,7 @@ application. Setting Up A New Network ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -First you have to set up a new network interface. It should be on a physically +First, you have to set up a new network interface. It should be on a physically separate network. Ensure that your network fulfills the xref:pvecm_cluster_network_requirements[cluster network requirements]. @@ -957,7 +957,7 @@ configured to do so. The traffic between the daemon and the cluster must be encrypted to ensure a safe and secure QDevice integration in {pve}. -First install the 'corosync-qnetd' package on your external server and +First, install the 'corosync-qnetd' package on your external server and the 'corosync-qdevice' package on all cluster nodes. After that, ensure that all your nodes on the cluster are online.