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installation: iso: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
authorChristoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
Thu, 21 Mar 2024 15:29:28 +0000 (16:29 +0100)
committerThomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Fri, 22 Mar 2024 10:35:04 +0000 (11:35 +0100)
commit520e3616039079500b246e82c969646c6ae25821
treed8160baa0bed9aa7314f6106f82f7fe9a5dbdedb
parent0d425d9d91df1d6250a5c47f00954114b6ced9fd
installation: iso: improve & align wording with pmg-docs

New paragraphs were taken from pmg-docs and adapted. Most changes
here are the result of basically "diffing" both documentations, choosing
the better prased/sounding sections. Some wording were slightly changed
as necessary to further improve them.

The equivalent changes will be done for pmg-docs too, to ensure they are
really the same in the end.

Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
pve-installation.adoc