docs: introduction: rewording and fixing of minor errors

Reworded one sentence for improved readability.
Fixed some minor language errors.

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>

diff --git a/docs/introduction.rst b/docs/introduction.rst
index a7935fd922c7d66e35a820b79486e5e6f6635a76..cca8109b726a35c429e2813eb14a65f16fb2a46a 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/introduction.rst
+++ b/docs/introduction.rst
@@ -4,17 +4,17 @@ Introduction
 What is Proxmox Backup Server
 -----------------------------
 
 What is Proxmox Backup Server
 -----------------------------
 

-Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class client-server backup software that
-backups :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and physical hosts.
-It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_ platform and
-allows you to backup your data securely, even between remote sites, providing
-easy management with a web-based user interface.
+Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class, client-server backup software
+package that backs up :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and
+physical hosts. It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_
+platform and allows you to back up your data securely, even between remote
+sites, providing easy management with a web-based user interface.

 
 Proxmox Backup Server supports deduplication, compression, and authenticated
 
 Proxmox Backup Server supports deduplication, compression, and authenticated

-encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as implementation language guarantees high
-performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high quality code base.
+encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as the implementation language guarantees high
+performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high-quality codebase.

 
 

-It features strong encryption done on the client side. Thus, it's possible to
+It features strong client-side encryption. Thus, it's possible to

 backup data to not fully trusted targets.
 
 
 backup data to not fully trusted targets.
 
 


@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ Main Features
    several gigabytes of data per second.
 
 :Encryption: Backups can be encrypted on the client-side using AES-256 in
    several gigabytes of data per second.
 
 :Encryption: Backups can be encrypted on the client-side using AES-256 in

-   Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mde
+   Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mode

    provides very high performance on modern hardware.
 
 :Web interface: Manage the Proxmox Backup Server with the integrated web-based
    provides very high performance on modern hardware.
 
 :Web interface: Manage the Proxmox Backup Server with the integrated web-based


@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Proxmox Backup Server consists of multiple components:
 * client CLI tool (`proxmox-backup-client`) to access the server easily from
   any `Linux amd64` environment.
 
 * client CLI tool (`proxmox-backup-client`) to access the server easily from
   any `Linux amd64` environment.
 

-Everything besides the web interface are written in the Rust programming
+Everything outside of the web interface is written in the Rust programming

 language.
 
  "The Rust programming language helps you write faster, more reliable software.
 language.
 
  "The Rust programming language helps you write faster, more reliable software.