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Docu: first proof reading
authorAaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Tue, 14 Apr 2020 15:12:47 +0000 (17:12 +0200)
committerDietmar Maurer <dietmar@proxmox.com>
Wed, 15 Apr 2020 04:52:59 +0000 (06:52 +0200)
commit4f3db187cfb4adcc7dacff2ae4fe5010fc2ee2c2
tree96596aacca923ca3fabd314158ba8471035f753c
parent9a328319dd792bee0b074462160eaf9464b054c4
Docu: first proof reading

This is a first proof reading of the currently existing documentation.

fixes (hopefully all):
* spelling
* grammar

Tries to increase readabilty and ease of understanding by simplifying
and restructing some sentences and paragraphs. Filler words which add
to the cognitive load but don't add anything are removed
(most notably `also`).
docs/administration-guide.rst
docs/glossary.rst
docs/installation.rst
docs/introduction.rst
docs/package-repositories.rst
docs/pxar/description.rst