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installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
authorChristoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
Thu, 21 Mar 2024 15:29:29 +0000 (16:29 +0100)
committerThomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Fri, 22 Mar 2024 10:35:04 +0000 (11:35 +0100)
commit67d2d94e7c0115e7d730a34c9a29cd91398e1f39
tree2267f5b241a706275fdcc838c69c1c31ed068f59tree
parent520e3616039079500b246e82c969646c6ae25821commit | diff
installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs

These changes are the result of basically "diffing" both documentations,
choosing the better prased/sounding sections. Some wording were also
slightly changed as necessary to further improve them.

The equivalent changes will be done for pmg-docs too, to ensure they are
really the same in the end.

Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
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