update source to Ceph Pacific 16.2.2

[ceph.git] / ceph / doc / rbd / iscsi-target-ansible.rst

diff --git a/ceph/doc/rbd/iscsi-target-ansible.rst b/ceph/doc/rbd/iscsi-target-ansible.rst
index 5f46be30241a230797e423d2ef69f1a3255e49e1..d38e3bd018c49c51d553318441f06c707e4593b4 100644 (file)
--- a/ceph/doc/rbd/iscsi-target-ansible.rst
+++ b/ceph/doc/rbd/iscsi-target-ansible.rst
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ Configuring the iSCSI Target using Ansible
 ==========================================
 
 The Ceph iSCSI gateway is the iSCSI target node and also a Ceph client
-node. The Ceph iSCSI gateway can be a standalone node or be colocated on
-a Ceph Object Store Disk (OSD) node. Completing the following steps will
-install, and configure the Ceph iSCSI gateway for basic operation.
+node. The Ceph iSCSI gateway can be provisioned on dedicated node
+or be colocated on a Ceph Object Store Disk (OSD) node. The following steps will
+install and configure the Ceph iSCSI gateway for basic operation.
 
 **Requirements:**
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ install, and configure the Ceph iSCSI gateway for basic operation.
 
 -  The ``ceph-iscsi`` package installed on all the iSCSI gateway nodes
 
-**Installing:**
+**Installation:**
 
 #. On the Ansible installer node, which could be either the administration node
    or a dedicated deployment node, perform the following steps:
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ install, and configure the Ceph iSCSI gateway for basic operation.
   If co-locating the iSCSI gateway with an OSD node, then add the OSD node to the
   ``[iscsigws]`` section.
 
-**Configuring:**
+**Configuration:**
 
 The ``ceph-ansible`` package places a file in the ``/usr/share/ceph-ansible/group_vars/``
 directory called ``iscsigws.yml.sample``. Create a copy of this sample file named
@@ -94,9 +94,9 @@ advanced variables.
 |                                      | nodes have access.                   |
 +--------------------------------------+--------------------------------------+
 
-**Deploying:**
+**Deployment:**
 
-On the Ansible installer node, perform the following steps.
+Perform the followint steps on the Ansible installer node.
 
 #. As ``root``, execute the Ansible playbook:
 
@@ -124,10 +124,10 @@ On the Ansible installer node, perform the following steps.
 
    .. important::
     Attempting to use the ``targetcli`` tool to change the configuration will
-    result in the following issues, such as ALUA misconfiguration and path failover
-    problems. There is the potential to corrupt data, to have mismatched
+    cause problems including ALUA misconfiguration and path failover
+    issues. There is the potential to corrupt data, to have mismatched
     configuration across iSCSI gateways, and to have mismatched WWN information,
-    which will lead to client multipath problems.
+    leading to client multipath problems.
 
 **Service Management:**