tfa: add notes regarding cluster creation and tfa

[pmg-docs.git] / getting-help.adoc

diff --git a/getting-help.adoc b/getting-help.adoc
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@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Community Support Forum
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 {pmg} itself is fully open source, so we always encourage our users to
-discuss and share their knowledge using the {forum}. The forum is fully
-moderated by the Proxmox support team, and has a quite large user base
-around the whole world. Needless to say that such a large forum is a
+discuss and share their knowledge using the {forum}. The forum is
+moderated by the Proxmox support team, and has a large user base
+around the world. Needless to say, such a large forum is a
 great place to get information.
 
 
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ Commercial Support
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 {proxmoxGmbh} also offers commercial {pricing-url}[{pmg} Subscription
-Service Plans]. System Administrators with a standard subscription
-plan can access a dedicated support portal with guaranteed reponse
-time, where {pmg} developers help them should an issue appear.  Please
+Service Plans]. Users with a Basic subscription or above
+have access to a dedicated support portal with guaranteed response
+times, where {pmg} developers can help them, should an issue appear. Please
 contact the mailto:office@proxmox.com[Proxmox sales team] for more
 information or volume discounts.
 
@@ -32,6 +32,6 @@ Bug Tracker
 
 We also run a public bug tracker at
 https://bugzilla.proxmox.com. If you ever detect a bug, you can file
-an bug entry there. This makes it easy to track the bug status, and
-you will get notified as soon as the bug is fixed.
+a bug entry there. This makes it easy to track the bug's status and
+get notified as soon as the bug is fixed.