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[mirror_edk2.git] / IntelFrameworkPkg / Include / Protocol / DataHub.h

diff --git a/IntelFrameworkPkg/Include/Protocol/DataHub.h b/IntelFrameworkPkg/Include/Protocol/DataHub.h
index d0db8397949ebc48159fa92f3bcfde932ee38e10..d6e7647ca7795e69db3fa75c56cbf6c8d1564b56 100644 (file)
--- a/IntelFrameworkPkg/Include/Protocol/DataHub.h
+++ b/IntelFrameworkPkg/Include/Protocol/DataHub.h
@@ -31,9 +31,8 @@
 // A Data Record is an EFI_DATA_RECORD_HEADER followed by RecordSize bytes of\r
 //  data. The format of the data is defined by the DataRecordGuid.\r
 //\r
-// If EFI_DATA_RECORD_HEADER is extended in the future the Version number must\r
-//  change and the HeaderSize will change if the definition of\r
-//  EFI_DATA_RECORD_HEADER is extended.\r
+// If EFI_DATA_RECORD_HEADER is extended in the future, the Version number and HeaderSize must\r
+//  change. \r
 //\r
 // The logger is responcible for initializing:\r
 //  Version, HeaderSize, RecordSize, DataRecordGuid, DataRecordClass\r
@@ -56,7 +55,7 @@ typedef struct {
 //\r
 // Definition of DataRecordClass. These are used to filter out class types\r
 // at a very high level. The DataRecordGuid still defines the format of\r
-// the data. See DateHub.doc for rules on what can and can not be a\r
+// the data. See the Data Hub Specification for rules on what can and can not be a\r
 // new DataRecordClass\r
 //\r
 #define EFI_DATA_RECORD_CLASS_DEBUG         0x0000000000000001\r
@@ -99,7 +98,7 @@ EFI_STATUS
 \r
   @param  This                  The EFI_DATA_HUB_PROTOCOL instance.\r
   @param  MonotonicCount        On input, it specifies the Record to return.\r
-                                An input of zero means to return the first record.\r
+                                An input of zero means to return the first record, as does an input of one.\r
   @param  FilterDriver          If FilterDriver is not passed in a MonotonicCount of zero,\r
                                 it means to return the first data record. If FilterDriver is passed in,\r
                                 then a MonotonicCount of zero means to return the first data not yet read\r
@@ -115,8 +114,8 @@ EFI_STATUS
   @retval EFI_OUT_OF_RESOURCES  Record was not returned due to lack\r
                                 of system resources.\r
   @note: Inconsistent with specification here: \r
-         In Framework for EFI Data Hub Specification,Version 0.9, This definition is named as\r
-         EFI_DATA_HUB_GET_NEXT_DATA_RECORD. The inconsistance is remained for backward compatibility \r
+         In Framework for EFI Data Hub Specification, Version 0.9, This definition is named as\r
+         EFI_DATA_HUB_GET_NEXT_DATA_RECORD. The inconsistency is maintained for backward compatibility. \r
 **/\r
 typedef\r
 EFI_STATUS\r
@@ -147,8 +146,8 @@ EFI_STATUS
   @retval EFI_OUT_OF_RESOURCES  The filter driver event was not registered\r
                                 due to lack of system resources.\r
   @note: Inconsistent with specification here: \r
-         In Framework for EFI Data Hub Specification,Version 0.9, This definition is named as\r
-         EFI_DATA_HUB_REGISTER_DATA_FILTER_DRIVER. The inconsistance is remained for backward compatibility \r
+         In Framework for EFI Data Hub Specification, Version 0.9, This definition is named as\r
+         EFI_DATA_HUB_REGISTER_DATA_FILTER_DRIVER. The inconsistency is maintained for backward compatibility. \r
 **/\r
 typedef\r
 EFI_STATUS\r
@@ -170,8 +169,8 @@ EFI_STATUS
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS           The filter driver represented by FilterEvent was shut off.\r
   @retval EFI_NOT_FOUND         FilterEvent did not exist.\r
   @note: Inconsistent with specification here: \r
-         In Framework for EFI Data Hub Specification,Version 0.9, This definition is named as\r
-         EFI_DATA_HUB_UNREGISTER_DATA_FILTER_DRIVER. The inconsistance is remained for backward compatibility \r
+         In Framework for EFI Data Hub Specification, Version 0.9, This definition is named as\r
+         EFI_DATA_HUB_UNREGISTER_DATA_FILTER_DRIVER. The inconsistency is maintained for backward compatibility.  \r
 **/\r
 typedef\r
 EFI_STATUS\r