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@@ -55,22 +55,22 @@ Hardware
 ~~~~~~~~
 
 ZFS depends heavily on memory, so you need at least 8GB to start. In
-practice, use as much you can get for your hardware/budget. To prevent
+practice, use as much as you can get for your hardware/budget. To prevent
 data corruption, we recommend the use of high quality ECC RAM.
 
 If you use a dedicated cache and/or log disk, you should use an
 enterprise class SSD (e.g. Intel SSD DC S3700 Series). This can
 increase the overall performance significantly.
 
-IMPORTANT: Do not use ZFS on top of hardware controller which has its
-own cache management. ZFS needs to directly communicate with disks. An
-HBA adapter is the way to go, or something like LSI controller flashed
-in ``IT'' mode.
+IMPORTANT: Do not use ZFS on top of a hardware RAID controller which has its
+own cache management. ZFS needs to communicate directly with the disks. An
+HBA adapter or something like an LSI controller flashed in ``IT'' mode is more
+appropriate.
 
 If you are experimenting with an installation of {pve} inside a VM
 (Nested Virtualization), don't use `virtio` for disks of that VM,
-since they are not supported by ZFS. Use IDE or SCSI instead (works
-also with `virtio` SCSI controller type).
+as they are not supported by ZFS. Use IDE or SCSI instead (also works
+with the `virtio` SCSI controller type).
 
 
 Installation as Root File System
@@ -725,12 +725,12 @@ In fact, there are some downsides to enabling new features:
 * Booting an older {pve} ISO to repair a non-booting system will likewise not
   work.
 
-IMPORTANT: Do not upgrade your rpool if your system is still booted with `grub`,
-as this will render your system unbootable. This includes systems installed
-before {pve} 5.4, and systems booting with legacy BIOS boot (see
+IMPORTANT: Do *not* upgrade your rpool if your system is still booted with
+`grub`, as this will render your system unbootable. This includes systems
+installed before {pve} 5.4, and systems booting with legacy BIOS boot (see
 xref:sysboot_determine_bootloader_used[how to determine the bootloader]).
 
-.Enable new features for a pool:
+.Enable new features for a ZFS pool:
 ----
 # zpool upgrade <pool>
 ----