improve text about basic configuration options

[pve-docs.git] / pve-installation.adoc

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index e389d1187f51013ca9e475efffb71d94bde151fe..8bc9b7d30a6a7e92d9a0fef7262d2ece59b900bb 100644 (file)
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -52,14 +52,14 @@ general use.
 Rescue Boot::
 
 This option allows you to boot an existing installation. It searches
-all attached hard disks, and if it finds an existing installation,
+all attached hard disks and, if it finds an existing installation,
 boots directly into that disk using the existing Linux kernel. This
 can be useful if there are problems with the boot block (grub), or the
 BIOS is unable to read the boot block from the disk.
 
 Test Memory::
 
-Runs `memtest86+`. This is useful to check if your memory if
+Runs `memtest86+`. This is useful to check if your memory is
 functional and error free.
 
 You normally select *Install Proxmox VE* to start the installation.
@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@ ZFS supports several software RAID levels, so this is specially useful
 if you do not have a hardware RAID controller. The `Options` button
 lets you select the ZFS RAID level, and you can choose disks there.
 
-The next pages just asks for basic configuration options like time
+The next pages just ask for basic configuration options like time
 zone and keyboard layout. You also need to specify your email address
-and select a superuser password.
+and superuser (root) password (must have at least 5 characters).
 
 The last step is the network configuration. Please note that you can
 use either IPv4 or IPv6 here, but not both. If you want to configure a
@@ -91,6 +91,9 @@ point your browser to the IP address given during installation
 (https://youripaddress:8006). {pve} is tested for IE9, Firefox 10
 and higher, and Google Chrome.
 
+NOTE: Default login is "root" (realm 'PAM') and the root password is
+defined during the installation process.
+
 
 [[advanced_lvm_options]]
 Advanced LVM Configuration Options
@@ -171,18 +174,6 @@ http://pve.proxmox.com/wiki/Install_Proxmox_VE_on_Debian_Jessie[wiki].
 endif::wiki[]
 
 
-{pve} Web Interface
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-
-After installation, further configuration is done via the {pve} web
-interface. Just point your browser to the IP address given during
-installation ('https://youripaddress:8006'). Proxmox VE is tested for
-IE9, Firefox 10 and higher, Google Chrome (latest).
-
-NOTE: Default login is "root" (realm 'PAM') and the root password is
-defined during the installation process.
-
-
 ifdef::wiki[]
 
 Video Tutorials