Fix typo in pvesr.adoc

[pve-docs.git] / pve-installation.adoc

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index 3d0895a51785bdc6febf755a314e9ffbab2cad2f..c07e1fbbe450eddf1d82a705ef5306dcffa67f49 100644 (file)
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ It includes the following:
 NOTE: During the installation process, the complete server
 is used by default and all existing data is removed.
 
 NOTE: During the installation process, the complete server
 is used by default and all existing data is removed.
 

-Please insert the installation media (e.g. USB-Stick, CD-ROM) and boot
+Please insert the installation media (e.g. USB stick, CD-ROM) and boot

 from it.
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-grub-menu.png"]
 from it.
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-grub-menu.png"]


@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ you can choose disks there. Additionally you can set additional options (see
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-select-location.png", float="left"]
 
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-select-location.png", float="left"]
 

-The next page just ask for basic configuration options like your
+The next page just asks for basic configuration options like your

 location, the time zone and keyboard layout. The location is used to
 select a download server near you to speed up updates. The installer is
 usually able to auto detect those settings, so you only need to change
 location, the time zone and keyboard layout. The location is used to
 select a download server near you to speed up updates. The installer is
 usually able to auto detect those settings, so you only need to change


@@ -133,26 +133,37 @@ administrator, for example:
 
 - Error messages from periodic CRON jobs.
 
 
 - Error messages from periodic CRON jobs.
 

+[thumbnail="screenshot/pve-setup-network.png"]
+

 All those notification mails will be sent to the specified email
 address.
 
 All those notification mails will be sent to the specified email
 address.
 

-[thumbnail="screenshot/pve-setup-network.png"]
-

 The last step is the network configuration. Please note that you can
 use either IPv4 or IPv6 here, but not both. If you want to configure a
 dual stack node, you can easily do that after installation.
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-installation.png", float="left"]
 
 The last step is the network configuration. Please note that you can
 use either IPv4 or IPv6 here, but not both. If you want to configure a
 dual stack node, you can easily do that after installation.
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-installation.png", float="left"]
 

-If you press `Next` now, installation starts to format disks, and
+If you press `Next` now, you will see an overview of your entered
+configuration. Please re-check every setting, you can still use the
+`Previous` button to go back and edit all settings here.
+
+If you press `Install` now, installation starts to format disks, and

 copies packages to the target. Please wait until that is finished,
 then remove the installation media and restart your system.
 
 copies packages to the target. Please wait until that is finished,
 then remove the installation media and restart your system.
 

-Further configuration is done via the Proxmox web interface. Just
+[thumbnail="screenshot/pve-install-summary.png"]
+
+If the installation failed check out specific errors on the second TTY
+(`CTRL + ALT + F2'), ensure your systems mets the
+xref:install_minimal_requirements[minimum requirements]. If the installation
+is still not working then look at our xref:getting_help[how to get help chapter].
+
+Further configuration can be done via the Proxmox web interface. Just

 point your browser to the IP address given during installation
 (https://youripaddress:8006).
 
 point your browser to the IP address given during installation
 (https://youripaddress:8006).
 

-NOTE: Default login is "root" (realm 'PAM') and the root password is
+NOTE: Default login is "root" (realm 'PAM') and the root password was

 defined during the installation process.
 
 
 defined during the installation process.
 
 


@@ -275,7 +286,9 @@ Install {pve} on Debian
 -----------------------
 
 {pve} ships as a set of Debian packages, so you can install it
 -----------------------
 
 {pve} ships as a set of Debian packages, so you can install it

-on top of a standard Debian installation. xref:sysadmin_package_repositories[After configuring the repositories], you need to run:
+on top of a standard Debian installation.
+xref:sysadmin_package_repositories[After configuring the repositories], you
+need to run:

 
 [source,bash]
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 [source,bash]
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