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Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 21 Jul 2020 12:58:29 +0000 (14:58 +0200)]
Add section with more infos about ZFS RAID levels
This new section explains the performance and failure properties of
mirror and RAIDZ VDEVs as well as the "unexpected" higher space usage by
ZVOLs on a RAIDZ.
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Dylan Whyte [Thu, 16 Jul 2020 08:55:39 +0000 (10:55 +0200)]
ha-manager: fix typos and grammatical errors; improve wording
This patch improves the English throughout the "High Availability"
documentation.
It mostly consists of small typo and grammar fixes, but also contains rewording
of some sections for the sake of readability.
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
Dylan Whyte [Wed, 15 Jul 2020 14:29:33 +0000 (16:29 +0200)]
README: fix grammatical error
Fixes a grammatical error on line 143 of the README adoc
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
Dylan Whyte [Wed, 15 Jul 2020 14:26:06 +0000 (16:26 +0200)]
Fix typos and wording
Update some lines to fix spelling and grammatical errors
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 13 Jul 2020 12:26:38 +0000 (14:26 +0200)]
storage: fixup PBS wiki link
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 13 Jul 2020 10:09:54 +0000 (12:09 +0200)]
bump version to 6.2-5
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Stefan Reiter [Thu, 18 Jun 2020 13:44:55 +0000 (15:44 +0200)]
Add man-page and notes about custom CPU models
Signed-off-by: Stefan Reiter <s.reiter@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 13 Jul 2020 10:04:29 +0000 (12:04 +0200)]
update static info
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 13 Jul 2020 09:54:52 +0000 (11:54 +0200)]
storage: make description column wider
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 13 Jul 2020 09:37:24 +0000 (11:37 +0200)]
add initial PBS docs
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 13 Jul 2020 09:36:57 +0000 (11:36 +0200)]
cifs: modernize a bit
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 7 Jul 2020 12:07:25 +0000 (14:07 +0200)]
getting help: use new mailing list url
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 7 Jul 2020 12:16:48 +0000 (14:16 +0200)]
update static information
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 18 Jun 2020 15:09:20 +0000 (17:09 +0200)]
zfs: use headings and define help anchors
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 18 Jun 2020 14:44:40 +0000 (16:44 +0200)]
sys boot: move section a bit down and title case it
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Wed, 20 May 2020 14:05:27 +0000 (16:05 +0200)]
sysboot: add a section on how to determine the used bootloader
Besides observing the boot process, `efibootmgr` seems to be the safest
bet. It should not show anything if booted in legacy BIOS mode. If
booted in UEFI mode, the boot entries should show which bootloader is
present.
Having both present should not happen in a regular use case AFAICT and
would need more consideration, or better, a reboot.
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Wed, 20 May 2020 14:05:26 +0000 (16:05 +0200)]
zfs-local: fix #2704 add disk replacement steps for grub
The documentation only covered replacing the disk with systemd-boot but
not if grub is used.
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Dominic Jäger [Tue, 2 Jun 2020 09:56:50 +0000 (11:56 +0200)]
pvesm: Add example & clarification for export
The literal usage of "qcow2+size" as well as what the command is supposed to do
has confused users [0].
[0] https://forum.proxmox.com/threads/trying-to-convert-raw-disk-to-vmdk-using-pvesm.70046/
Thomas Lamprecht [Sat, 6 Jun 2020 17:45:49 +0000 (19:45 +0200)]
save pveOnlineHelpInfo as const
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Sat, 6 Jun 2020 17:44:52 +0000 (19:44 +0200)]
whitespace cleanup
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 3 Jun 2020 12:46:44 +0000 (14:46 +0200)]
SDN: wording follouwp
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Alexandre Derumier [Tue, 26 May 2020 15:46:08 +0000 (17:46 +0200)]
sdn: fix qinq zone2 example
Signed-off-by: Alexandre Derumier <aderumier@odiso.com>
Alexandre Derumier [Tue, 26 May 2020 15:46:07 +0000 (17:46 +0200)]
sdn: add vnet vlan-aware option
Signed-off-by: Alexandre Derumier <aderumier@odiso.com>
Alexandre Derumier [Tue, 26 May 2020 15:46:06 +0000 (17:46 +0200)]
sdn: add a note to add "source /etc/network/interfaces.d/*"
Signed-off-by: Alexandre Derumier <aderumier@odiso.com>
Alexandre Derumier [Mon, 11 May 2020 08:19:23 +0000 (10:19 +0200)]
sdn: vlan: allow non vlanaware bridge.
Also rename ove "interface" to "switch", to avoid confusion
with a ovs internal interface
Wolfgang Link [Mon, 11 May 2020 06:42:47 +0000 (08:42 +0200)]
update link for YubiKey documentation
Signed-off-by: Wolfgang Link <w.link@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Sun, 10 May 2020 18:14:04 +0000 (20:14 +0200)]
bump version to 6.2-4
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Sun, 10 May 2020 18:20:41 +0000 (20:20 +0200)]
sdn: better overview and typo fixes
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Sun, 10 May 2020 18:10:48 +0000 (20:10 +0200)]
adming guide: move SDN down, after VM/CT and before firewall
While the rationale to put it before CT/VM isn't wrong at all it's
and advanced and currently even experimental topic. Lot's of PVE
admins/users won't require to get up and running initially.
Those who search it will still find it easily.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Sun, 10 May 2020 18:09:52 +0000 (20:09 +0200)]
sdn: add some reference anchors, some polishing
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Sun, 10 May 2020 17:43:36 +0000 (19:43 +0200)]
rework SDN docs a bit
drop thumbnails for now, would need updating anyway and the examples
are of bigger help for now anyway, IMO.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Alexandre Derumier [Thu, 12 Mar 2020 08:36:07 +0000 (09:36 +0100)]
add sdn documentation
Signed-off-by: Alexandre Derumier <aderumier@odiso.com>
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 8 May 2020 16:40:22 +0000 (18:40 +0200)]
bump version to 6.2-3
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 8 May 2020 16:40:16 +0000 (18:40 +0200)]
cert-management: fix denglish typo
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 8 May 2020 16:36:53 +0000 (18:36 +0200)]
fix scrot density
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 8 May 2020 16:26:32 +0000 (18:26 +0200)]
pveum: add ldap sync panel screenshots
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Dominik Csapak [Fri, 8 May 2020 11:29:55 +0000 (13:29 +0200)]
pveum: use correct cli command for realm sync
Signed-off-by: Dominik Csapak <d.csapak@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 7 May 2020 19:41:23 +0000 (21:41 +0200)]
bump version to 6.2-2
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 7 May 2020 19:39:33 +0000 (21:39 +0200)]
certs: add some screenshots
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Mira Limbeck [Mon, 4 May 2020 13:41:21 +0000 (15:41 +0200)]
remove SLAAC reference from cloudinit docs
As we don't currently support SLAAC in the nocloud network format code, remove
the reference from the docs.
Signed-off-by: Mira Limbeck <m.limbeck@proxmox.com>
Alwin Antreich [Thu, 7 May 2020 14:40:13 +0000 (16:40 +0200)]
add section about backup compression algorithms
as a short description about the different algorithms in use by vzdump.
Signed-off-by: Alwin Antreich <a.antreich@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 7 May 2020 17:59:33 +0000 (19:59 +0200)]
rework certificates chapter, section ordering, ..
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 6 May 2020 18:23:33 +0000 (20:23 +0200)]
bump version to 6.2-1
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 6 May 2020 13:16:15 +0000 (15:16 +0200)]
html TOC: add "back to index" link
use a unicode symbol for the back arrow, should nowadays be widely
available
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 6 May 2020 12:31:37 +0000 (14:31 +0200)]
update static data and schema definitions
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 6 May 2020 08:33:00 +0000 (10:33 +0200)]
cert management: move some headings a level up for better visibility
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 6 May 2020 08:30:34 +0000 (10:30 +0200)]
avoid own chapter for meager pvenode, move to sysadmin
As else we have a big promising heading for "PVE Node Management"
with just two acme examples and a bit of Wake-On-LAN support.
Move the latter into sysadmin, the former goes only in man-page
environment, as the ACME docs are much more telling.
Ideally we move some stuff inside pvenode and see if it merits it's
own chapter, separating the more basic "Linux-y" sysadmin stuff from
PVE node, but not today.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 5 May 2020 08:53:35 +0000 (10:53 +0200)]
ldap sync: minor wording + reference addition
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Dominik Csapak [Mon, 4 May 2020 13:32:31 +0000 (15:32 +0200)]
add documenation for ldap syncing
explaining the main Requirements and limitations, as well as the
most important sync options
Signed-off-by: Dominik Csapak <d.csapak@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 4 May 2020 11:08:53 +0000 (13:08 +0200)]
network: typo fixes
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 4 May 2020 09:10:48 +0000 (11:10 +0200)]
cert management: split examples a bit up for readabillity
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Fabian Grünbichler [Wed, 22 Apr 2020 08:38:12 +0000 (10:38 +0200)]
certs: extend ACME section with DNS/plugin info
Signed-off-by: Fabian Grünbichler <f.gruenbichler@proxmox.com>
Andreas Steinel [Wed, 29 Apr 2020 15:30:29 +0000 (17:30 +0200)]
Also mentioning FC-based storage in pve
Signed-off-by: Andreas Steinel <A.Steinel@gmail.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 30 Apr 2020 10:36:53 +0000 (12:36 +0200)]
installation: usb windows: adapt wording
Co-authored-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 30 Apr 2020 07:55:14 +0000 (09:55 +0200)]
installation: improve section for creating USB drive from Windows
For those not even having the attention span to read 4 short and
straight forward written sentences..
Co-authored-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 23 Apr 2020 18:25:05 +0000 (20:25 +0200)]
intro: s/Proxmox VE/{pve}/g
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Wolfgang Link [Tue, 17 Mar 2020 12:58:37 +0000 (13:58 +0100)]
Revision of the pvesr documentation
Improvement of grammar and punctuation. Clarify the HA limitations.
Remove future tense in some sentences. It is not good to use it in
technical/scientific papers. Rewrite some sentences to improve
understanding.
Signed-off-by: Wolfgang Link <w.link@proxmox.com>
Reviewed-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 17 Mar 2020 11:43:54 +0000 (12:43 +0100)]
fix apparmor profile config key
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Stefan Reiter [Tue, 10 Mar 2020 17:01:22 +0000 (18:01 +0100)]
Add documentation for virtio-rng
Signed-off-by: Stefan Reiter <s.reiter@proxmox.com>
Dominic Jäger [Thu, 27 Feb 2020 09:55:33 +0000 (10:55 +0100)]
pveceph: Reducing number of PGs is possible
From Ceph Nautilus onwards reducing the number of placement groups is possible.
Signed-off-by: Dominic Jäger <d.jaeger@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 21 Feb 2020 13:48:42 +0000 (14:48 +0100)]
fix wiki-special link to "USB installation"
this was broken twice but in one rollout:
* one commit fixed the grammar from "Install from USB Stick" to
"Install from a USB Flash Drive"
* then a followup comment renamed the whole thing "Prepare
Installation Media" as also other medias where handled (shortly)
The wiki link breakage isn't really detctable until rolled out on
mediawiki, and it's a bit of an obscure thing anyway..
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 19 Feb 2020 14:53:09 +0000 (15:53 +0100)]
bump version to 6.1-6
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Alwin Antreich [Mon, 17 Feb 2020 14:02:14 +0000 (15:02 +0100)]
pveceph: reword memory precondition
and add the memory target for OSDs, included since Luminous. As well as
distinguish the memory usage between the OSD backends.
Signed-off-by: Alwin Antreich <a.antreich@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 17 Feb 2020 11:53:34 +0000 (12:53 +0100)]
pct: readd missing whitespace
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 17 Feb 2020 10:57:17 +0000 (11:57 +0100)]
pct: typo fixes
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Mon, 17 Feb 2020 10:47:32 +0000 (11:47 +0100)]
pct: improve template/images section
Bring the usage in order, cannot create a CT from a template before
we downloaded it ;)
Also (re)-mention the web interface as a TIP.
cron job was replaced by systemd timer, adapt that too.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 16:55:02 +0000 (17:55 +0100)]
pct: move "CT storage" below "guest OS"
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 16:48:00 +0000 (17:48 +0100)]
pct: move "disable apparmor" in new subsection for security considerations
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 16:47:26 +0000 (17:47 +0100)]
pct: move "security considerations" below CT settings
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 16:26:41 +0000 (17:26 +0100)]
pct: guest OS cfg: mention /etc/os-release
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 16:26:27 +0000 (17:26 +0100)]
pct: move "guest OS config" below CT settings
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 15:47:55 +0000 (16:47 +0100)]
pct: misc fixes
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 15:39:55 +0000 (16:39 +0100)]
pct: rework restart migration a bit
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 13:00:49 +0000 (14:00 +0100)]
pct: fix text width to 80cc
use `git show --word-diff=color` to see that almost no word change
happened, only realignment.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Fri, 14 Feb 2020 13:00:30 +0000 (14:00 +0100)]
pct: followup: casing and wording fix
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Oguz Bektas [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 14:23:09 +0000 (15:23 +0100)]
rewrite and extend pct documentation
* rephrase some parts.
* update old information
* add info about pending changes and other "new" features
Co-Authored-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Co-Authored-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 17:30:56 +0000 (18:30 +0100)]
installation: update wiki link to Buster
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 11:07:43 +0000 (12:07 +0100)]
bump version to 6.1-5
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 11:23:54 +0000 (12:23 +0100)]
run make update for static/schema information
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 10:56:40 +0000 (11:56 +0100)]
pveum: move group and apitoken headings one level up
They are major sections, equal to "Users" so do not make them a sub
section of "Users" but rather their own. This makes both also visible
in the full admin guide TOC.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 10:53:12 +0000 (11:53 +0100)]
apitoken: use CAUTION for token-only-once-visible note
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 10:52:40 +0000 (11:52 +0100)]
followup: fix trailing spaces and text width
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Fabian Grünbichler [Thu, 13 Feb 2020 08:38:24 +0000 (09:38 +0100)]
document API tokens
Signed-off-by: Fabian Grünbichler <f.gruenbichler@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 11 Dec 2019 09:25:46 +0000 (10:25 +0100)]
firewall: update and expand used ports
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Fabian Grünbichler [Thu, 30 Jan 2020 12:54:01 +0000 (13:54 +0100)]
include allowtoken info in api-viewer
Signed-off-by: Fabian Grünbichler <f.gruenbichler@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Wed, 12 Feb 2020 13:12:47 +0000 (14:12 +0100)]
fix casing
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 17:05:40 +0000 (18:05 +0100)]
fix some typos
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 17:01:34 +0000 (18:01 +0100)]
fix some typos
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 16:13:30 +0000 (17:13 +0100)]
installation: only the data on selected disks gets destroyed
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 16:11:42 +0000 (17:11 +0100)]
prepare usb iso: add fdatasync to dd command and document if=
Also move the parameters which need adaption further to the back to
allow users to edit them "faster"
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 15:19:48 +0000 (16:19 +0100)]
rename "usbstick" to "installation media" and move before wizard
Besides the fact that "usb stick" is germaenglisch it allows to move
that section up which brings the chapter in a better order, as one
needs to prepare the installation media before they can use the
installer itself ;-)
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 15:18:22 +0000 (16:18 +0100)]
installation/usb stick: improve and hyperlink
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Thomas Lamprecht [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 14:08:59 +0000 (15:08 +0100)]
system-requirements: fix title casing, use again title case
Like the rest of the docs predominantly use.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 08:55:45 +0000 (09:55 +0100)]
Fix whitespace and line length
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 09:52:50 +0000 (10:52 +0100)]
Overhaul Package Repositories
improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 08:55:44 +0000 (09:55 +0100)]
Overhaul System Software Updates
improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 08:55:42 +0000 (09:55 +0100)]
Overhaul Sysadmin
improve phrasing
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 08:55:41 +0000 (09:55 +0100)]
Overhaul Install from USB flash drive
improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands, OSX is now macOS, Rufus
with dd mode is preferred to etcher
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 08:55:40 +0000 (09:55 +0100)]
Overhaul System Requirements
improve phrasing, align headlines, rearrange requirement lists
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
Aaron Lauterer [Tue, 11 Feb 2020 08:55:39 +0000 (09:55 +0100)]
Overhaul Translation
improve phrasing
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>